"I think the content of it is great how you lot have added effects such as black and white instead of colour gives it that classy look, but the transitions of when tom is getting beaten up could do with a minor tweak when heather hits him round with a bat make it more believable to make it more believable but other than that, I like how with every blinking eye that video blacks out"
"The opening killed it for me. Rest of it doesn't compare, the opening was brill :)"
"The beginning shots are varied which show the thought that went into shooting and storyboarding, it also makes it look more professional. In some places around 0.36 the audio from the actors are slightly quiet and drowned out by the music but the idea of it is there and the shots are good. The transitions could be smoother but the sharp effect makes it more interesting. The varied shots after 1.08 are good as they add an effect to the film and makes it more appealing to watch. I also think after 1.28, how the shots go black as he is blinking is a very effective way of showing it, makes it different and more powerful and engaging to watch. The only thing i'd say that needs improving is the sound control at 0.36, but apart from that the film is well made and shot."
'The camera angles are good, the bad bit is when the guys are sitting at the table, goes on for a bit and is unclear to the viewer.'
'Good editing, angles are good, music fits perfectly, didn't quite understand it though.'
'Music is very good, the title is misleading, baseball bat hitting is OK, I got confused, acting could be better, its good though for a first time thing, i liked it, 7/10'
'I like how all the shots are your basic angles, that at the end you have the shot from his eyes, footsteps all the way through is very clear, and background noise outside of the wind which may not of been intentional but worked well, although the voices are quite muffled.'
'I think the beginning is very good and the sound, but I find the 2nd half or 3/4's is very sloppy considering how good the first 1/4 is, but as this is your first wack at is its pretty good, i think you need to focus on lighting and clarity of the shot next time.'
'You could hear heather's heels well, the split screen thing was pretty good as well, i wasn't too crazy about her randomly walking back in though. As I had no idea why she was outside in the first place.'
'Good editing, angles are good, music fits perfectly, didn't quite understand it though.'
'Music is very good, the title is misleading, baseball bat hitting is OK, I got confused, acting could be better, its good though for a first time thing, i liked it, 7/10'
'I like how all the shots are your basic angles, that at the end you have the shot from his eyes, footsteps all the way through is very clear, and background noise outside of the wind which may not of been intentional but worked well, although the voices are quite muffled.'
'I think the beginning is very good and the sound, but I find the 2nd half or 3/4's is very sloppy considering how good the first 1/4 is, but as this is your first wack at is its pretty good, i think you need to focus on lighting and clarity of the shot next time.'
'You could hear heather's heels well, the split screen thing was pretty good as well, i wasn't too crazy about her randomly walking back in though. As I had no idea why she was outside in the first place.'
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